Writing assignment description: This proposal was something my group and I worked on for our clients. The design proposal had every aspect of what we wanted to do and how we were gonna do it, getting grants, measurments of design, fundraisers, and etc. The design proposal had everything you needed to know about our project and what our team, 20/20 Vision, were trying to accomplish. The proposal also had photos to show the site and physical planning of where and in what space our design would be implemented.
Reflection: Some of my strengths on this assignment were, my ability to help my group members with certain grammar errors, such as when trying to explain something I made sure my group explained in the right order to help the flow of the proposal. Also really pushing and doing large amounts of work in class and sometimes out of class, I tried to get as detailed and fluent as I could. Some streches were when we had to write about the actual proposal section and talk about our design, sometimes when I wasnt sure what I should write next, I would repeat myself and then the pice would just feel very repetitive. This is a habit I have and have been trying to work on from now on. Somethings I would like to revise on my work would be the fundraising and mission statement. I would like to go over and make then sound more profesional.